I'd say that sounds about spot on @David. Specifically introducing some kind of protective hierarchy as in 3.2, the guiding principles and change of language suggested in 3.3 and overall integration of the Bikeability guidance where appropriate. Perhaps, in addition it should contain somewhere a further 'should' or recommendation that all cyclists consider NSI training?
I'd say that sounds about spot on @David. Specifically introducing some kind of protective hierarchy as in 3.2, the guiding principles and change of language suggested in 3.3 and overall integration of the Bikeability guidance where appropriate. Perhaps, in addition it should contain somewhere a further 'should' or recommendation that all cyclists consider NSI training?